I feel poorly about lurking and not leaving reviews for the past few chapters. You caught me off guard with something -- I can't remember what it was! -- and I was worried the story would go awry in terms of plot, so I've been waiting to see how things turned out. And my random fears were ridiculous because it's turned out really well! The first few chapters could've led to a lot of different conclusions, but I really like the way you've gone.
The plot is awesome. You manage your plot twists really well (Zabini, Malfoy's children), and bring us to a really satisfying conclusion -- Malfoy's resolved and Harry's getting there. And you write so well! And it's not anything specific, that's the beauty of it -- you write the story well so all that comes to attention is the plot. It's only after having read it that I realise part of the reason every installment is so good is because your writing is so seamless and...enjoyable to read! Heh.
Right. So I felt you deserved a somewhat detailed review. You know, in appreciation of such a fine story. Kudos on great work :)
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The plot is awesome. You manage your plot twists really well (Zabini, Malfoy's children), and bring us to a really satisfying conclusion -- Malfoy's resolved and Harry's getting there. And you write so well! And it's not anything specific, that's the beauty of it -- you write the story well so all that comes to attention is the plot. It's only after having read it that I realise part of the reason every installment is so good is because your writing is so seamless and...enjoyable to read! Heh.
Right. So I felt you deserved a somewhat detailed review. You know, in appreciation of such a fine story. Kudos on great work :)