I really enjoyed this! Yay! And thanks for your comment!
sometimes, during the long dialog exchanges, I lose track of who's saying what. And yay! for constructive criticism ;)
Yeah, I need to watch for that. I used to go too far the other way and weighed down the dialogue extensively; it seems I've over-compensated, though, and you're not the first person to point it out.
Ah well. Learn from our mistakes, and all that. Thanks!
::scurries back to insert judiciously-placed Harry-saids ;) ::
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Re: Good stuff!
Date: 2005-07-16 03:42 pm (UTC)Yay! And thanks for your comment!
sometimes, during the long dialog exchanges, I lose track of who's saying what.
And yay! for constructive criticism ;)
Yeah, I need to watch for that. I used to go too far the other way and weighed down the dialogue extensively; it seems I've over-compensated, though, and you're not the first person to point it out.
Ah well. Learn from our mistakes, and all that. Thanks!
::scurries back to insert judiciously-placed Harry-saids ;) ::