The way you wrote it was cute and sweet, actually.
Now, if it had flopped off mid-thrust and fallen on Claire's face, and she leapt up, screaming, now THAT... that would have been funny. Except for Ben, for whom it would have been tragic. So, funny sex is hard to do.
I'll go check your Early Work for Dreadful Euphemisms. *If* you really want me to. ::evil snicker::
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Re: In answer to your questions...
Date: 2005-05-31 05:18 am (UTC)The way you wrote it was cute and sweet, actually.
Now, if it had flopped off mid-thrust and fallen on Claire's face, and she leapt up, screaming, now THAT... that would have been funny. Except for Ben, for whom it would have been tragic. So, funny sex is hard to do.
I'll go check your Early Work for Dreadful Euphemisms. *If* you really want me to. ::evil snicker::